I think your poem is very beautiful. Besides, I think it's great that you express what you feel, that you don't keep it to yourself. It's good that as a man you don't deny your sensitive side, being human. Have you ever thought about making a book of all your works?
dalidy wrote: if I still live today it is thanks to poetry it is for me a liberation it is my greatest passion without it to let off steam I would surely have killed myself when the
pain becomes unbearable I sit at the table I write everything that passes through my head whether it is beautiful or stupid I relieve
myself I unload myself on my page I have
to thank poetry because it is it that keeps me alive then long live poetry!
Thank you to the first poet who on this fact
knew how to transmit to me the spark of poetry a little respite a chance at life. your poem is very beautiful dalidy 🙁y):👏